First cut feed back

This is the first cut of my film trailer. The feedback that got the first cut was very positive. Everybody seemed to like the trailer and all said that it work to show enough to seem like a trailer and not a short film. They also said that with the humour and props used it reaches my demographic.
The things that need to be changed and improved to help this trailer gain a higher grade is the dialogue. It’s seemed to be too quiet and sometimes hard to hear. To solve this problem I will A.D.R most if not all the dialogue, this will help the audience be able to hear all of the line clearly.
Another thing that needed to be changed was the titles that are put throughout the trailer. This is because they were all in the same font and when the title of the Film comes up it needed more impact so I have to change the font of the writing.
An overall comment given was “you’ve handled the combination of horror to comedy quite successfully. Pity the dialogue is not clear. Don’t hold back, you can be quite outrageous in a trailer.”